Organic Food For Thought
Jada Rain Cardwell
Original EIP Draft:
The purpose of the EIP First Draft was to understand the directions of our actual EIP assignment. This allowed us to research, clearly plan out, and present the information that we have learned for our final EIP assignment. It laid out the argument or analysis of the topic establishing our authority as an expert on our topics.
About the assignment
Feedback from Malcolm
I made a 92/100 on this assignment. Some valuable insight that my professor provided me with:
"Jada, I enjoyed reading this essay about organic vs conventional foods. You've done some good research and I learned a lot. See my notes for revision in the essay. Use your margin outline to determine the best organization for your main point. A good start."
Reflection:
Writing the first draft was kind of challenging. I have so much data that I have collected about my topic, but making sure it goes into proper sections was difficult. I also had a tough time with the introduction of my paper; I will be changing it for my final draft. The margin outline did help me to see that some of my information needs to be moved around. I am not looking forward to editing the first draft, but it will be worthwhile, because it is needed.