Organic Food For Thought
Jada Rain Cardwell
Draft Feedback:
Caitlyn provided good feedback in order for me to edit my Topic Proposal and make it even better. I enjoyed getting this feedback because I feel like the more insight I have, the better I will be able to tell how others view my work. This is useful so I can better myself as a writer. I am glad we were able to have a discussion about what steps I should take in order to edit this assignment.
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I provided feedback for my group member, Connor. His topic is about marijuana legalization. As you can see, I went straight in on the editing process. I like to let the writer know of grammatical issues or what seems to be cloudy, as far as meaning. Alternate ways of stating things is also a method I use while editing. He did a great job and my commentary is below.