Organic Food For Thought
Jada Rain Cardwell
Final EIP Draft:
The purpose of the EIP assignment was to present information that we've learned this semester about our topic of interest. This shows that we are "experts" on our topic. We should be able to communicate information to others who know little or nothing about our topic.
About the assignment
Changes
Marked
We were asked to mark our changes from our EIP First Draft to view the differences made. These changes are from our own opinion, peer review, and professor review. I actually had two different sets of changes due to a peer review done after my first changes. This allowed me to make an effective EIP Final Draft above. The changes made can be viewed below.
Reflection:
The biggest change I made to my final draft was my introduction. It was a good introduction, but it was a little off topic. It made sense, but I changed it in order to make my writing flow better. I appreciated my instructor's feedback because it helped a lot in the editing process. Most of my changes were having things correctly cited throughout my paper. I had the right citations, just in the wrong format. I also went back and added some information that I felt was necessary in the second changes. I also fixed the titles, because I forgot to label them correctly. Editing wasn't too bad because I worked really hard on my first draft due to the many drafts I went through beforehand.